FEAST's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Aquatic Stimulation]

Wow

I love the breakout. This is fantastic.

[NGHH'11 - Em-Hotep vs Self]

Yeah, so...

I have to give it to Self by a little, but maybe you should just send the track back to both of them and tell them to just try again?

[NGHH'11 - Cynic vs MadFLeX]

Cynic

Was over by the end of the first verse....

[Dan Roth - Caelum]

Love the melody.

The mastering could be better. Follow this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cHcVU5 cGUNE&feature=channel

It's the same style as yours. A great track to learn from.

[Dan Roth - Breathe]

This is incredible.

Seriously, what a composition.

Your hard work really shows through. Everything flows well, great instrument choice, excellent sounding mastering. This is the whole package.

Congrats on the top 5.

Added you to my fav artists cant wait to hear more of your work. 5/5. 10/10. Downloaded.

As far as any possible improvements go:

There is a slight hitch where it breaks out around 5:36 - It almost breaks out too late, like 1 or two beats? It should break out right as the clock hits 5:35 OR 5:34, (maybe even with a snare hit!), but instead breaks out with a bass hit at 5:36....

The lead synth is lacking a bit of mid-range (the one that kicks in at 2:39). Find a way to fill it out. As of now it sounds a bit fuzzy and shrill. Keep that cutoff filer moving and it should sound nice.

And really thats it. The rest is excellent. Feel free to check out my work as well!

[Skittles - F-777]

ALMOST THERE!!!

At 0:07 - A synth lead kicks in. Increase the sound stage by making 2 of them, pan one left, on right, then EQ and verb them differently.

At 0:15 - A synthy bass pulse comes in. Put a fuzz effect on it and eq a little more treble, make it grind more.

At 0:31-0:36 there is that background synth. It is a low volume here and everywhere really. Turn it up a little.

At 1:19 - THAT PLUCK OMG SO SICK!

At 1:47 - That harpy lead....move it an octave up okay?

At 2:18 - Add a whistle fade that rises with the bass to heighten the explosion.

Right now - Click this link and give me tips on how to improve my stuff!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/393259

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much! I do plan on fixing this song up in the future and i will
use your tips!

Thank you!!

[xKore - Destroyer (NG Cut)]

Badass much?

Jesus. Tone it down. GO on vacation so the rest of us can FREAKING CATCH UP.

[Bittersweet Symphony Remix VIP]

Fuck.

This is sick.

[[oove] Requiem]

O

....... : O .........!

If I was Megatron, I would bang this right before I blew your planet up.

[xKore - Fire]

...Well...

So, don't tell anyone I said this, but,

THIS IS FUCKING SICK MY NIQQA!

Shhhh....